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Blade, Betrayal, Bane, Battle by ~BioYuGi:iconBioYuGi:



It’s the wrong in the right.
It’s the dark in the light.
It’s the void in the hole.
It’s the loss at the goal.

When chaos kills hope,
And victims can’t cope,
Is when love is the least,
Struck down by the beast.

Power can be held,
But you’ll find it will meld
With anger once shelled
From torments that yelled.

I am caught in the cyclone.
I am stuck in a doomed zone.
I am bound to my spirit.
I am screaming, can’t hear it.

Where innocence cowered,
The pain overpowered,
And all that would fight
Were trapped by the night.

A blade that can kill
Has too high a bill,
The loss of one’s will
With the rise of dark skill.

The fiend is coming for them.
The fiend has hold of the gem.
The fiend is growing stronger.
The fiend shall live on longer.

What tool was once pure,
Now has not a cure,
And those that it slices
Give in to their vices.

The fool that was misled
Ignored what I said.
Now I’m forced instead
To watch loved ones turn dead.
©2009 ~BioYuGi
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Author's Comments

When I am traveling and cannot get to my computer I tend to write down things, and often it is poetry. I have a fair collection of decent poems that I will now start putting on here. This one is partially inspired by a mix of misheard lyrics from a Snow Patrol song and the tale of Ashbringer from the Warcraft series. I was planning on having a story up by next week but I have been called away for smoething important and will be away for a week. I will have my laptop so I may still be able to write but it probably will not get posted buring that week because I am unsurre about Internet connectivity.

One last note, this being my first time, the sub-genres for poetry are ridiculous. Some I can understand but it is just a poem. They actually have an erotic section. Now I am no poetry buff by any means but I read it occasionally, but never have I been turned on by reading the exploits of what road to walk down or some poor fellow who cannot get a bird out of his house.

One really last note for some reason whenever I discuss things poetic I get a slight British accent and it is very hard to get rid off, like after watching a marathon of Monty Python or Zero Punctuation or Dr Ashens.

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:iconraventhegreat09:
I understand the British accent problem. I once watched a 4 hour marathon of Monty Python's flying circus and had a slight British accent for the rest of the day. And WTF, EROTIC poems? If there is such a thing, how come we aren't about them in school?

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wow It is good

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Thank you, for the fav as well.

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np

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I don't much like poetry,but I must say, that is a great poem! As for the british accent thing, I have a friend who, when he gets really mad, starts talking in a heavy irish accent.

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Wow. Good.

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Thanks a lot.

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Thank you, and do not fret about the picture.

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