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12 Days of Hypnos Day 5: Not What He was Expecting

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Jane was a quiet, pleasant girl. Always picked on by the popular girls, always trying to be nice. There was only one boy in school who recognized that, named Jeffrey. He wanted to help Jane out, and he knew some hypnosis...

“You sure this is safe?”

“Yes, you can’t do anything you don’t want to.”

“Okay, let’s try it.” Jeffrey had Jane sit in a chair, where he started playing soft music. Over a few minutes, Jane felt very relaxed and calm, slumping in her chair.

“Jane, can you hear me?”

“…y-yes.”

“I want you to think Jane, think hard. Imagine the happiest you could be.”

“Happiest?”

“The secret desire you have, that would help you feel good. Then, maybe I can help you,” Jeff smirked. He’d seen this before in his collection, soon Jane would be a cock-hungry slut begging to please him.

“I-it’s wrong…” Jane said.

“No, Jane. Tell me. What is it?”

“I want...” she said, smiling. “I want to be a bitch.” Jeff was startled.

“W-what?”

“I want to be like the girls at school. Cocky, stuck-up, having guys do their bidding. It looks fun,” she said, her eyes closed as she imagined being like them.

“B-but Jane, you’re so nice, wouldn’t you rather be diminutive and loyal?”

“No. Fuck that,” she said, giggling a little. “I want to be a queen of the school who everyone hates but wants to bang.”

“I-I don’t even,” Jeff said, accidentally stopping the music, waking her up.

“Wow, I feel a lot better now!”

“You do?”

“Yeah! Get your keys. You’re going to buy me new clothes.”

“B-b-but.”

“Shut up. Get me a purse and I’ll let you rub my feet.” Jane’s eyes were confident and she was damn sexy with this attitude.

“Okay.” Maybe this would work out.
Day 5 everyone. Honestly, not too happy with how this one came out, but the word limit really hit me hard this time.
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*Comically maniacal laugh* AHAHAHA! The folly of the presumptive fool is so entertaining! AHAHA! What a dumbass to assume he knows the inner secrets of a person. The fool only happened to get lucky with being able to work his goal into reality. AHAHAHA!
*coughs* Anyways... Yeah. Pretty interesting idea you don't see a lot.