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“You are nothing.”

“I am nothing.”

“You are my slave.”

“I am your slave.”

“I am your ma-. “

“You are my master, and I will obey you.” The master smiled.

“Good slave,” she said. This had taken weeks, but now it would fall into place. She took a breath. “Slave, hear my commands.”

“Of course master.”

“Good. When I say “I submit”, I will no longer be your master, okay?”

“Yes master.”

“Call me slave, and take this,” she said, handing over the device she’d used to hypnotize her, switching it on and looking at it. “Now, you are going to be my master, and I’m your slave, alright?”

“Yes, you are my slave,” the hypnotized woman said, looking intently at her former master.

“I have no free will, and you dominate every aspect of my life,” the previous master said.

“I dominate you, every aspect. You have no will, and I control you,” the new master began as the programming took root in her mind. The new slave shook her head slightly, feeling woozy.

“Um, yeah. Now, you need to take care of your slave and treat her good, so she’s more loyal.”

“You will be loyal, and obedient. Do this and you will be rewarded.” The slave smiled dimly as she felt her mind fall away to her master’s words.

“I only will obey you, and you will use me for anyth-“

“You will do whatever I want, whenever I want. You can only obey me. Submit to me.” The slave’s eyelids closed as her brain was wiped clean.

“I… I submit,” she said, and lost herself completely to her new master.

The master smiled, looking at her slave. “Good slave. Hm, I wonder what it’s like to be a slave…” she pondered, looking at the device.
For day 3, the challenge was to write a master becoming the slave, so I thought this was a fun idea. Especially once you get to the ending. Imagine how long this has been going on between these two.
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momotaru99 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
well that will last awhile. unless the device runs out of power.
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Cryptvokeeper Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH HYPNO-CEPTION!
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:iconbioyugi:
BioYuGi Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep!
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godzillahomer Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Funny, they'll probably be at this for the next few months
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StattStatt Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
OH, sould have seen that one comming! Lol, awesome story, love the ending! (o'w'o)
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BioYuGi Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot.
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StattStatt Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
No problem at all! (o'w'o) Happy to make you happy! (o^-^o)
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BluRider Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Writer
Hahaha - oh, the endless-cycle twist is really creative.

300 words, a really cool turnaround scene... and then a genuinely delightful twist? I'm very impressed.

Clearly you don't got that medal on yer portrait fer nothin', son!
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BioYuGi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that means a lot.
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Magnaking Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
On the third day of Hypnos, my master gave to me... three confused people!
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